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Gwenderlin
Number of posts : 159 Age : 35 Location : Forres/Morryshire Registration date : 2008-08-15
| Subject: Comments on the story Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:38 am | |
| any comments critisisim or any that jazz ya's wanna say type in here much apreciated oh and yes I am dislexic so yeah I relised i made like a million spelling errors but meh | |
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Siheld
Number of posts : 1446 Age : 32 Location : Holland Registration date : 2008-08-17
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:50 am | |
| About your dislexic.. I kinda read over all the spelling errors! | |
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Gwenderlin
Number of posts : 159 Age : 35 Location : Forres/Morryshire Registration date : 2008-08-15
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:59 am | |
| and thats why i woves you <3 'huggles' | |
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Vypra Admin
Number of posts : 2810 Age : 47 Location : Warrington, UK Registration date : 2008-03-10
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Thu Jun 11, 2009 10:07 am | |
| I always find your stuff very creative and the characters always grab my interest.
If there was a way round the dyslexia it would be even better as, unfortunately, it does distract occasionally. | |
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Chassandra
Number of posts : 199 Registration date : 2008-12-18
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Thu Jun 11, 2009 10:17 am | |
| You can always grab someone who's been writing a bit and ask them to tweak it. Spelling, commatation, grammatics and all that. But as I said, nice story. Keep it coming please | |
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Adalan
Number of posts : 255 Age : 40 Registration date : 2009-01-16
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Thu Jun 11, 2009 10:56 am | |
| Since I do this a lot at work anyway I'll put myself available for proof reading if people would like. Though I can't guarrantee a super-speedy turnaround, sadly. | |
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Snicka
Number of posts : 1229 Age : 38 Location : Budapest, Hungary Registration date : 2008-05-27
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Thu Jun 11, 2009 11:12 am | |
| I liked the story, but it has nothing to do with the Warcraft universe, so I'm not sure if it's the proper thread for it? If you do something with the numerous spelling mistakes, this will be an excellent read. | |
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Vypra Admin
Number of posts : 2810 Age : 47 Location : Warrington, UK Registration date : 2008-03-10
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Thu Jun 11, 2009 11:50 am | |
| Its ok to be in here Snicka but maybe Gwen should add in the title that its non-wow? | |
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Gwenderlin
Number of posts : 159 Age : 35 Location : Forres/Morryshire Registration date : 2008-08-15
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Thu Jun 11, 2009 12:17 pm | |
| i said at end of last story next one will not be a wow story but i'll put in title later it's non wow | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Thu Jun 11, 2009 12:22 pm | |
| If you're worried about your dyslexia and you use Firefox then you can get a dictionary add on that will show you where your spelling has gone wrong. I'm dyslexic and I find it very helpful, especially with the added fun of keyboard dyslexia to add to the normal one! |
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Gwenderlin
Number of posts : 159 Age : 35 Location : Forres/Morryshire Registration date : 2008-08-15
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Thu Jun 11, 2009 12:23 pm | |
| hmmm guess I shuld try get fire fox then hehe | |
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Vypra Admin
Number of posts : 2810 Age : 47 Location : Warrington, UK Registration date : 2008-03-10
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Thu Jun 11, 2009 12:54 pm | |
| - Gwenderlin wrote:
- i said at end of last story next one will not be a wow story but i'll put in title later it's non wow
thanks hun. i think Snicka is thinking about the ppl that visist the forum expecting WOW stories so they might not have read the comment on your last one. Just read the last update...looking forward to the next bit | |
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Gwenderlin
Number of posts : 159 Age : 35 Location : Forres/Morryshire Registration date : 2008-08-15
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Thu Jun 11, 2009 12:56 pm | |
| cant seem to rename the thingy so blah i'll put note on it later gona work some more on story though | |
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Vypra Admin
Number of posts : 2810 Age : 47 Location : Warrington, UK Registration date : 2008-03-10
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Thu Jun 11, 2009 1:04 pm | |
| All you need to do is go to the 1st post in your story and click the 'edit' button, then you can go ahead and change the title | |
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Vypra Admin
Number of posts : 2810 Age : 47 Location : Warrington, UK Registration date : 2008-03-10
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:39 pm | |
| hehe. really liked that last part. the shopping trip was very funny | |
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Gwenderlin
Number of posts : 159 Age : 35 Location : Forres/Morryshire Registration date : 2008-08-15
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:58 pm | |
| thought i'd shove some comedy in the mix tee hee | |
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Sahina
Number of posts : 20 Registration date : 2009-04-13
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Sun Jun 14, 2009 2:05 pm | |
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Gwenderlin
Number of posts : 159 Age : 35 Location : Forres/Morryshire Registration date : 2008-08-15
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Sun Jun 14, 2009 2:44 pm | |
| <--- doesn't have the game atm hence why not been online but thanks for tip any ways | |
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Gwenderlin
Number of posts : 159 Age : 35 Location : Forres/Morryshire Registration date : 2008-08-15
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Sat Jun 20, 2009 10:35 am | |
| well, i loved writing that story for ya all, Next story will be called Tale of the Crimson Family, it shall be Marcus' accounts but not same as this story as Nicania failed to show the time of things, as they were together for a few months before the end. Any ways should be cool to write again and hope you all liked this one and hope you enjoy the next one it's been a pleasure to write | |
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Vypra Admin
Number of posts : 2810 Age : 47 Location : Warrington, UK Registration date : 2008-03-10
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Sat Jun 20, 2009 10:45 am | |
| look forward to reading things from Marcus's point of view | |
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Gwenderlin
Number of posts : 159 Age : 35 Location : Forres/Morryshire Registration date : 2008-08-15
| Subject: Re: Comments on the story Sat Jun 20, 2009 2:04 pm | |
| coolies wont be up for few days or so like because got a bit to do like but will be up and hope you all will like it | |
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