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PostSubject: Cat stab. A great SoM legend.   Sat Mar 06, 2010 1:10 am

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PostSubject: Re: Cat stab. A great SoM legend.   Sat Mar 06, 2010 8:54 am

This is perhaps the oddest thing i've ever read...

constructive criticism time:

1) Line breaks make things much easier to read.

2) You didn't say where, at what time and on what day the event was taking place.

3) No offence, but it looks like an exchange between a bunch of people on acid. What exactly did this 'Madbomber' do that would merit an event in his honour?

4) As a cat lover, i'm not keen on an event that seems to promote cruelty to cats.

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PostSubject: Re: Cat stab. A great SoM legend.   Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:44 am

I am shocked to see that my well thought through drunk post has been deleted.

Let me rephrase myself then, now that I am sober.

SoM participates in fellatio amidst the fires of Lucifers realm.
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PostSubject: Re: Cat stab. A great SoM legend.   Sat Mar 06, 2010 1:26 pm

In english, and in most western languages, a golden rule with dialogue is 'only one speaker per paragraph'. So for instance:

Adalan waltzed merrily through the gardens of Silvermoon. Suddenly he spotted a young lady coming his way. "How now, my lady!" exlaimed Adalan. "Too long have I been without the gentle grace that your presence provides."

"And I yours, good sir," she replied. "Pardon my absence, I beseech you. I have been away, away across the ocean's breadth, and too far removed from civilised life to even write you a letter."

At this Adalan was taken aback. He put a hand to his heart in mock-agony, and fell to his knees. "Oh cruel mistress, that thou wouldst put thy duties to thy craft above staying thy heart with mine. I longed to hear merely that thou-"

"Oh do shut up Adalan. You're being silly," said Kethin.

"Duly noted."
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PostSubject: Re: Cat stab. A great SoM legend.   Sat Mar 06, 2010 3:25 pm

Jormun has been banned for posting pictures deemed inappropriate for this forum.

all his posts will be removed

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PostSubject: Re: Cat stab. A great SoM legend.   Sat Mar 06, 2010 5:12 pm

Vypra wrote:
Jormun has been banned for posting pictures deemed inappropriate for this forum.

all his posts will be removed

what did he do? Im realy curious..
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PostSubject: Re: Cat stab. A great SoM legend.   Sun Mar 07, 2010 11:32 am

ohhh same :S
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PostSubject: Re: Cat stab. A great SoM legend.   Sun Mar 07, 2010 5:42 pm

Curiosity killed the c- ahhhh... sorry.
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PostSubject: Re: Cat stab. A great SoM legend.   Mon Mar 08, 2010 8:20 pm

Heh... Jormun shows up, trying to clear SoM's name - then gets himself banned. How ridiculous.
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PostSubject: Re: Cat stab. A great SoM legend.   Mon Mar 08, 2010 11:12 pm

*Waiting for a new rant post abut elitism on SSL
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