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Gwenderlin

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PostSubject: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptyThu Jun 11, 2009 8:38 am

any comments critisisim or any that jazz ya's wanna say type in here Smile much apreciated

oh and yes I am dislexic so yeah I relised i made like a million spelling errors but meh Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptyThu Jun 11, 2009 8:50 am

About your dislexic..
I kinda read over all the spelling errors!
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptyThu Jun 11, 2009 8:59 am

and thats why i woves you <3 'huggles'
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptyThu Jun 11, 2009 10:07 am

I always find your stuff very creative and the characters always grab my interest.

If there was a way round the dyslexia it would be even better as, unfortunately, it does distract occasionally.
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptyThu Jun 11, 2009 10:17 am

You can always grab someone who's been writing a bit and ask them to tweak it. Spelling, commatation, grammatics and all that.
But as I said, nice story. Keep it coming please Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptyThu Jun 11, 2009 10:56 am

Since I do this a lot at work anyway I'll put myself available for proof reading if people would like. Though I can't guarrantee a super-speedy turnaround, sadly.
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptyThu Jun 11, 2009 11:12 am

I liked the story, but it has nothing to do with the Warcraft universe, so I'm not sure if it's the proper thread for it?
If you do something with the numerous spelling mistakes, this will be an excellent read. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptyThu Jun 11, 2009 11:50 am

Its ok to be in here Snicka but maybe Gwen should add in the title that its non-wow?
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptyThu Jun 11, 2009 12:17 pm

i said at end of last story next one will not be a wow story Razz but i'll put in title later it's non wow
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptyThu Jun 11, 2009 12:22 pm

If you're worried about your dyslexia and you use Firefox then you can get a dictionary add on that will show you where your spelling has gone wrong. I'm dyslexic and I find it very helpful, especially with the added fun of keyboard dyslexia to add to the normal one!
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptyThu Jun 11, 2009 12:23 pm

hmmm guess I shuld try get fire fox then hehe
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptyThu Jun 11, 2009 12:54 pm

Gwenderlin wrote:
i said at end of last story next one will not be a wow story Razz but i'll put in title later it's non wow

thanks hun. i think Snicka is thinking about the ppl that visist the forum expecting WOW stories so they might not have read the comment on your last one.

Just read the last update...looking forward to the next bit Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptyThu Jun 11, 2009 12:56 pm

cant seem to rename the thingy so blah i'll put note on it later gona work some more on story though
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptyThu Jun 11, 2009 1:04 pm

All you need to do is go to the 1st post in your story and click the 'edit' button, then you can go ahead and change the title Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptySun Jun 14, 2009 1:39 pm

hehe. really liked that last part. the shopping trip was very funny Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptySun Jun 14, 2009 1:58 pm

thought i'd shove some comedy in the mix tee hee
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptySun Jun 14, 2009 2:05 pm

Re: Dislexia

If you have trouble spelling correctly in-game, there's an addon called "Misspelled" that works as an in-game spell checker.

http://www.wowinterface.com/downloads/info13493-Misspelled.html
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptySun Jun 14, 2009 2:44 pm

<--- doesn't have the game atm hence why not been online Razz but thanks for tip any ways Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptySat Jun 20, 2009 10:35 am

well, i loved writing that story for ya all, Next story will be called Tale of the Crimson Family, it shall be Marcus' accounts but not same as this story as Nicania failed to show the time of things, as they were together for a few months before the end. Any ways should be cool to write again and hope you all liked this one and hope you enjoy the next one Smile it's been a pleasure to write Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptySat Jun 20, 2009 10:45 am

look forward to reading things from Marcus's point of view Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Comments on the story   Comments on the story EmptySat Jun 20, 2009 2:04 pm

coolies Smile wont be up for few days or so like because got a bit to do like but will be up and hope you all will like it
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